From: PICKERELL Loretta
Sent: Thu May 31 10:09:21 2012
To: CALDERA Stephanie
Cc: PERRY Marylou
Subject: RE: RM-E-Cycles - Final EQC Submittal.docx
Importance: Normal
Attachments: RM-E-Cycles - EQC Submittal 5 30 12 Comment change.docx; Stephanie— The change is in response to comment #7. Thanks, Loretta From: PICKERELL Loretta Sent: Wednesday, May 30, 2012 10:34 AM To: VANDEHEY Maggie; CALDERA Stephanie Cc: PERRY Marylou Subject: FW: RM-E-Cycles - Final EQC Submittal.docx Maggie and Stephanie – I fixed one typo in the attached draft, so please use the draft attached to this email (same doc name as the draft in Maggie’s email below). [FYI - here’s the change: Comment 6. Two-tier fee structure would more equitably meet Approved! Thanks for your patience with one more read through! Appreciate your work on this -- please let me know if you have questions. Loretta X5808 From: VANDEHEY Maggie Sent: Wednesday, May 30, 2012 7:38 AM To: PICKERELL Loretta Cc: PERRY Marylou; CALDERA Stephanie Subject: RE: RM-E-Cycles - Final EQC Submittal.docx Loretta, I’ve accepted your changes and suggestions after reviewing your comments. I did not change language to any alternative you suggested in your comments but left the original language. I moved Table 4. I removed your comments from this version. Additionally, I’ve changed the template to reflect your change to the five-year review – thank you! Please approve. Maggie From: PICKERELL Loretta Sent: Tuesday, May 29, 2012 4:53 PM To: VANDEHEY Maggie Cc: PERRY Marylou; CALDERA Stephanie Subject: RE: RM-E-Cycles - Final EQC Submittal.docx Maggie- Attached are my suggested fixes in track changes – noted a few more this afternoon (e.g., cost/unit, consistency with tenses, missing words), some in unlikely places (e.g., Five-Year Review and Commenters). I’ll check in with you Wednesday morning. Thanks, Loretta From: PICKERELL Loretta Sent: Tuesday, May 29, 2012 12:32 AM To: VANDEHEY Maggie; CALDERA Stephanie Cc: PERRY Marylou Subject: RE: RM-E-Cycles - Final EQC Submittal.docx Maggie— Looks like we needed a flash read through at the end of our speed session Friday. I found a couple places I think we’ll want to fix - will show them to you Tuesday. Thanks, Loretta From: VANDEHEY Maggie Sent: Thursday, May 24, 2012 5:09 PM To: CALDERA Stephanie Cc: PICKERELL Loretta; PERRY Marylou; AERNE Melissa; MASON Palmer Subject: RM-E-Cycles - Final EQC Submittal.docx Hi, Loretta, Mary Lou and I finished our “speed editing” to incorporate today’s edits. We accepted your changes and mine with a couple of minor wording changes. Thank you for your work on this! I’ve established bookmarks for each of the section headings. You may notice that I removed the link to Attachment A in the recommendation because it will be in the sidebar of the pdf. The team really deserves a hero’s thanks and we’ll celebrate once you’ve finalize it! Enjoy your four-day break. Maggie X 6878 s program objectives.].